Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Arts
... the availability of arts to all people.Arts is basically a important part of societ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...of arts to all people.Arts is basically a important part of society and it needs ...
^
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...it needs to be encouraged at all levels.But investing that much as invested in mili...
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Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...n military is not the right thing to do.As arts and military is way more different...
^^
Line 1, column 320, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...ry is way more different from each other,and they both are controlled by government....
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , navy
...form includes in military like air force,navy,defense and all.Military plays a role i...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Military
...ary like air force,navy,defense and all.Military plays a role in protecting civilians of...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...y terrorist activity is not in progress.To ensure all this if government funds a o...
^^
Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...k or calamity that is going to destruct nations entity,that will be a good step from th...
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Line 3, column 502, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , that
...that is going to destruct nations entity,that will be a good step from that governmen...
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Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
... from that government. Though by this,in any case i do not believes that investi...
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Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...vernment. Though by this,in any case i do not believes that investing is arts ...
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Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'believe'?
Suggestion: believe
... Though by this,in any case i do not believes that investing is arts is not beneficia...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
...nvesting is arts is not beneficial or so,as arts also plays a very vital role in th...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...in getting tourist attraction in country,but the same amount of money invested in th...
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Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...vested in that field is not a wise step.As it will help in making your country a b...
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Line 5, column 410, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...ttacked by terrorist where arts has its main focus,an amount which is needed for escalatin...
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Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , an
... terrorist where arts has its main focus,an amount which is needed for escalating t...
^^^
Line 7, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Arts
...n important part. In addition to this,Arts also play a very significant role in re...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...in reflecting the tradition of a country,and government is responsible for protectin...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ting its countrys own cultural heritage.In a way,if artist flaunted some masterpie...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
... countrys own cultural heritage.In a way,if artist flaunted some masterpiece that o...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...reasing the economy of that country. In conclusion,Government is responsible fo...
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Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Government
...conomy of that country. In conclusion,Government is responsible for taking any decision ...
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Line 9, column 127, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...and which want what amount of investment,they should invest in arts and flaunt their ...
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Line 9, column 283, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Military
... a whole its protection and dignity too.Military can help them in protecting boundaries ...
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Line 9, column 384, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Government
...ake their culture beyond the boundaries.Government should consider some factors before and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, in any case

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 387.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00516795866 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10434118808 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49354005168 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 23.0359550562 334% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.6309991215 60.3974514979 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 387.4 118.986275619 326% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.4 23.4991977007 329% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 5.21951772744 287% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 7.80617977528 346% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294547320281 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181884471304 0.0831039109588 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141834893274 0.0758088955206 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181884471304 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141834893274 0.0667264976115 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.9 14.1392134831 289% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.68 48.8420337079 -14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.3 12.1743820225 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.88 8.38706741573 130% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 11.8971910112 256% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 11.2143820225 292% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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