We are in the 21st century, where one can experience their association with technology in day to day life. Waking up the alarm, commuting to office by metro trains, wearing a sports watch to keep up with the daily recommended exercise by WHO and many more. These examples are testimony to way technology has dominated in last few decades. But at the back of our mind, we all know, that these innovations would not have been possible without scientific research. In fact, research is one the key factor in determining the well being of a society and growth of Nation. So rather than putting sanctions on research government should fund more and more research in coming days.
The world is already moving toward multi polarity and in these times it is of utmost importance to any nation to be more and more self-dependent. Government will have to develop and provide aid, to more and more research institutes in order to achieve the goal of being self-dependent. The ties between the friendly countries are more transient now than ever before. Consider for example, the long-term relationship between Saudi Arabia and United states. America has been arms supplier to Saudi for decades and reciprocally Saudi has fed the need of Americas gasoline. But recently American defence systems were unable to thwart attacks on the Saudi refineries which in turn has made Saudi to fund research on developing indigenous defense equipment’s. Apart from that there are several achievements in medical field for the welfare of humanity, one of such is fighting virus Ebola. Ebola vaccine development was made possible only by research.
In addition to that the research has been the major driver of the economy for many countries such as Russia. Russia has developed many modern arms and defense equipment’s through decades of research. It has been estimated that 20% of their GDP share comes from arms and ammunition export to counties like India, China, Iran etc. S-400, one of the most advanced missile systems, is a great example.
Therefore, let it be medical or technological advancement, they are both achieved through research. If a government fails to provide support for research and development, then it may experience issues like brain-drain, slowing economy, and in in some worst cases the country may even have rivals to challenge their territory. NASA is, for example, has space scientists from almost all across the world. Around 36% of these scientists are believed to be Indian decent. These Indian researchers would have preferred NASA either due lack of research facilities in India or because the scanty government funding. So Government should invest more in research and development facilities
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Suggestion: in
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Message: Did you mean 'descent'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, for example, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2277.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 442.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15158371041 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83068565366 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56334841629 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 719.1 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8107722374 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.875 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95833333333 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180385411598 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499007073193 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607370229011 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109605422901 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604009867121 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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