The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
Technologies has increase radpidly and exponentailly and has seen no boundaries in the last two to three decades. Humans have started living and surrounding themselves with machines and they try to upgrade these machines very frequently. Some might argue that machines are made by humans so they cannot exeed the superiority of human mind, but I disagree. The validation of my stance would be given in the following essay.
Day-by-day, humans are becoming more dependent on machines, to do their daily work. The first thing the human checks when he or she gets up from thier sleeps is their mobile phone even before they go for a bath or have breafast. Machines are become a part of human life and we cannot survie without them. The invention of mobile phones have many advantages and disafvantages. Few advantages would be, it helps to connect one with friends and family, click photos, play games, gain knowledge, and much more. But these all advantages comes with a cost, people are becoming addcited to it and instead of forcing on physicial relationship, they focus on virtual one. The mobile phone are programmed in such a way that they show things which you like and this makes you hooked on to them and make you an addict. Soon without realsing the phone is controlling the mind of human instead of other way around.
This is very harmful of socierty. It was in the year 1950, where for the first time, Alan Turing asked the question 'Can Machine Think?' This lead to a new field of invention in technology, the field of 'Artificial Intelliegence or AI'. AI is used everywhere these days from industries to automate task and increase efficency to students using to to complete their assignment faster. AI are also used in self-driving cars and though the program is develop by a human, it causes less accidents then a person driving a car. Other such example is 'ChatGPT'. It is a program in which it will answer any question which is presented in front of it within seconds, it is used by students to professionals to overcome their quires.
However, we cannot fully say that machines are superior then human mind. It was a human who has inveted these machine in first place and not the other way around. Though, the industry rely on these machines to automate their way, human presence would be required. Everyday programmers are trying to make AI thinks like a human but it would be years before the AI can think like human and overtake the human mind and become superior.
In conclusion, I would say that human and machine go hand in hand and they both are dependent on each other for their survial. Now with the pace the technologies are becoming advance, we won't have to wait for many years to see a machine which can work independently and like a human being, and when this happen it their are chances that the machine would overcome the human mind and be the superior one.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'asked' instead.
Suggestion: asked
..., where for the first time, Alan Turing asked the question Can Machine Think? This lead to a new f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...nd increase efficency to students using to to complete their assignment faster. AI ar...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'developed'.
Suggestion: developed
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Message: Did you mean 'less accidents than'?
Suggestion: less accidents than
...rogram is develop by a human, it causes less accidents then a person driving a car. Other such exam...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun accidents is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Suggestion: than
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2382.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 507.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69822485207 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55688561049 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487179487179 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 753.3 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5545598306 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.28 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.28 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361417855988 0.243740707755 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10573809991 0.0831039109588 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115171791496 0.0758088955206 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247853916529 0.150359130593 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130293663511 0.0667264976115 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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