The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
This modern era becomes easier by using the different developed convoluted devices. People search their aim with broad concept. I agree with the statement that rapid pace of life produces more unpredictable problems. I feel this way for some reasons: to create social life, to develop the financial support, and to resolve the different problems related to the daily life.
To begin with, rapid pace makes unusual types of problems, for instances various type of the diseases arises. From the decades of year before, gastric, which is abdomen related problem, is atypical; however, today that is normal disease. Generally people do not care about the healthy lifestyle and food. They take food just for remedies to their hunger. There are many reasons behind this prompt, we have developed hospital facilities, hence we become careless. It brings social hindrance to maintain the reputation. Rapid pace produces the disturbance to meet daily, which creates lack of conversation. Hence social life becomes not good.
Secondly, people running to gain the more and more money, they have one type of competition. Due to this type of thinking they are provoked by themselves. Slowly they are going to be hermit. They don't feel love and care towards the society. Which really brings problems to their life.
Finally, we can say rapid pace of life is harmful for our life. It is needed to become calm and peaceful. Equal communication and to take conversation between different members is important factor for them. Moreover, to resolve the daily life problems serious thinking is appropriate.
To recapitulate, daily pace of life produces more problems rather than solution. People want easy and less physical activity, which makes man fat and awkward. Which is not accustomed to the our society. Hence it is needed to stop the rapid pace of life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 301.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13289036545 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57033808979 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548172757475 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1079125812 60.3974514979 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.8 118.986275619 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.04 23.4991977007 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.16 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286593407111 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766382567657 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969689580599 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172551285351 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589004977423 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 48.8420337079 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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