Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Every situation has different circumstances and in turn, requires measures to be taken accordingly. A leader is a person who understands these circumstances and acts as per requirement, representing the interests or rights of one or more people. A great personality once said, 'A leader is a person who should lead by actions and not by hollow promises'. Every situation gives rise to a leader, who is willing to fight and stand for what is right. Thus, I agree that leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them. Below, I will present reasons defending my position.
Let us take into consideration a small agriculture-dependent town, the people in this town are starving because they can not harvest their crops as the water supply to their town has been terminated to promote import from outside countries, of the crops they were planting, and the officer in charge is not responding to their requests, now the people in this town need to find a solution to their problem. They need a proper plan that can be propitious to them, and in this scenario, a person comes forward leading the people towards a well-organized civil protest against the authorities, that person was Mahatma Gandhi. He guided the farmers' proclivity towards a non-violent protest against the authorities and lead them to victory and got the water they needed. The above-mentioned situation required a person who was capable of controlling a disappointed crowd and who can understand them. And thus, that gave birth to the famous Mahatma Gandhi who knew how to get his people what they deserved.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'farmers'' or 'farmer's'?
Suggestion: farmers'; farmer's
...erson was Mahatma Gandhi. He guided the farmers proclivity towards a non-violent protes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 266.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95864661654 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02366203172 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575187969925 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.6561224356 60.3974514979 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.909090909 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0738095845595 0.243740707755 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439385989114 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695729112401 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067992201246 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456560592556 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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