Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences are not equally suited for many tasks
The statement linking to the discrimintaion of tasks in terms of gender is certainly true in many aspects in life where a physical strength greatly matters.
"Men are from Mars and women are from Venus'' is a popular saying which explains the inherent differences between Men and women. During the olden days, predominently working as a warriors, and women in household stuffs. By nature men are physically stronger and women are more mentally stronger than men.
During the early days there were no technologies, gadgets and other sophisticated lifestyles. Even to get water people have to walk miles and draw water from wells,ponds,rivers. Forget about the comforts, just to fullfill the basic necessities like Food, clothing, shelter it was an enormous struggle which required physical effort.In 1990's men would go out in search of job like hunting and women would stay in house taking care of family households .Days passed in early 2000s men are employed in areas like mechanical industries like Welding, plumbing and factory related works were women will work in hospitality setcors like tourism, hotel management, air hostess. It is not that the women are incapable, but these work nature physcially drain a perosn's energy.
Due to the cost, inadequate man power to operate the machines in areas like agriculture, carpentry, constructions male population are more than female. It is extremely difficult for a man to cut a tree using the axe in the hot sun, just imagine a woman in place of that man.
But today, after the advent of technology the physical work is minimized and females are found in large number. There are lot of women CEO's coming into the picture where the physical power is neutralized. However, still we have a lot of practical difficulties where women will go for matternity leave and lot of other complications in work place due to the employement of women force.
Hence, due to the inherent nature and physical differences men and women are not equally suited for many tasks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a warrior' or simply 'warriors'?
Suggestion: a warrior; warriors
...he olden days, predominently working as a warriors, and women in household stuffs. By natu...
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Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ponds
... to walk miles and draw water from wells,ponds,rivers. Forget about the comforts, just...
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Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...bout the comforts, just to fullfill the basic necessities like Food, clothing, shelter it was an ...
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Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...struggle which required physical effort.In 1990s men would go out in search of job...
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Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'In the 1990s'.
Suggestion: In the 1990s
...struggle which required physical effort.In 1990s men would go out in search of job like ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n house taking care of family households .Days passed in early 2000s men are emplo...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Days
...house taking care of family households .Days passed in early 2000s men are employed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 33.0505617978 21% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 333.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07807807808 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8336734782 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570570570571 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.873228179 60.3974514979 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.785714286 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322052692787 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112271854797 0.0831039109588 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142284409293 0.0758088955206 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197956374448 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.180411896342 0.0667264976115 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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