The most effective way to understand contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these consideration shape your position.
Culture is an umbrella term which encompasses the social behavior and norms found in human societies, as well as the knowledge, beliefs, arts, laws, customs, capabilities, and habits of the individuals in these groups(Wikipedia).The Youths are the main and the largest part of any society, thus a vital driving force of the culture. Therefore, as the prompt suggests, one can strongly believe from the following three examples that, the most efficacious way to study any trendy culture is to analze the youth choices, styles or trends.
As mentioned in the above paragraph, youths being the largest part of the society, any entrepreneur should logically address the youth's choices for that particular brand that he is planing to sell. For example,When, Mark Zukerberg first invented Facebook application, he named it 'The Facebook'. But after studying the market,and when he got a suggestion from one of the famous 'young' enterpreneurs, to change the name to something more casual. He eventually changed it to 'Facebook' just to make it sound 'cool' to the 'youngsters'. Therefore, having the knowledge of youth's choices helped him to make his application more famous and eventually profitable.
Similarly, having knowledge of the fasion trends followed by the young generation of any part of the world can help any fashion industries to double the profit of their company. For instance, 'Myntra', Bengaluru-based (Karnataka, India), is an Indian fasion E-commerece company founded in 2007. It was established by Mukesh Bansal along with Ashutosh Lawania and Vineet Saxena, now acquired by flipkart in May of 2014. The company initially used to sell personalized products, such as t-shirts, cups, pads, etc. But eventually started to expand its root in fashion industries which helped it to double the revenue and became a hit. Myntra, according to the sources, stressed upon the 'youth trend' in India. They imports and sells the clothings that are liked by the youth of the country, which attracted the major population and made it instantly famous. Thus, to succeed in business, it has become a trend to first study the youth culture.
Many student Migrates to other countries like united States of America, United Kingdom, Germany, etc to acquire higher degrees from famous universities.
A survey has stated that whenever students targets a country for their furthur education, they start watching the series, movies or documentries of that specific country. This helps them to understand the environment and culture of the society. For instance, series like Big Bang Theory, How I Met Your Mother, Or short movies posted by the students of the university etc, helped them to mold themselves according to their trend. Here, nobody tries to understand the elderly-society norms because the main part of the countries is young generation.
"The Youth of today are the leaders of tomorrow"-Nelson Mandela.The so-called 'trend' is dynamic as we can depict from this quote. Many may contradict with the passage saying society comprises of 'both' young as well as elderly generation. But nobody can deny that the main or largest part or the driving force of any culture are 'youngsters'.Therefore in conclusion, it is important to study young trends to effectively understand the contemporary culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2774.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 525.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28380952381 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78673985869 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03167615643 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537142857143 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 845.1 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.615635349 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.608695652 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8260869565 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21739130435 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138313166999 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382406981763 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279713985659 0.0758088955206 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650785145968 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352054080654 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 148.0 100.480337079 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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