a nation should require all its student to study the same national curriculum unit they enter the college
This topic of issue mainly conveys that a nation should require all its student to study the same national curriculum unit they enter the college. Education plays the main role in forming the basis of the child's future. They are the one who is going to carry the responsibilities of the nation. So there should be a strong base in their formative years so that they are not only successful in their life but also turns to be a good citizen. So the curriculum being followed should be similar but schools should have freedom to introduce an advance part in their own curriculum.While major part of the curriculum should be same as the whole nation there should be some part that should be changes for the betterment of children life.
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First all of ,consider a uniform curriculum which is very useful in many ways. It determines a standard level which requires by every student ti clean before he is able to take another academic step. A common curriculum brings a stable and universal learning pattern which allows the children to learn which is followed throughout the nation.A common pattern helps a student who leaves a school to another school. For example, consider the children of government staffs who gets transfers frequently. The children of them will frequently gets the school changed. If there is not uniform system, the child would feel very difficult to adapt themselves to the new system this is a great disadvantage. according to me, a uniform system should be followed throughout the nation so that it makes easier for such people who changes the school often.
Futher more, now a days colleges are keeping entrance exams for the admission to their colleges . When there is a uniform system, the students those who are writing the entrance would have the same knowledge as the others, which make easier to the judge the student by their entrance exam. When there is no uniform system, the curriculum of the entrance would differ for student who didn't brought by that curriculum so that entrance exam cant judge the students properly. So i believe there should be uniform curriculum through out the nation.
However, even though there is lot advantages in uniform system, schools should not bind with the uniform system every time. Each student differ from each other. So the school should implement some changes so that the talent from each student should be utilized effectively. Hence the school should allow some discretion in making certain thinhs accordingly.
In end i would like to conclude that a uniform pattern on the whole is very important at nation level. however at the same time, there should be some changes made to bring the talents
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, while, for example, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2226.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 453.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91390728477 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5288290674 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470198675497 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4585909105 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.181818182 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5909090909 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95454545455 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351107699372 0.243740707755 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104850568588 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141700227952 0.0758088955206 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183045504794 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112248253248 0.0667264976115 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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