A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
National curriculums are necessary among many countries. It is a fundamental part of the national education system. I agree that students are required to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
What is the content in national curriculums ? There might be some difference between countries. For example, students in Taiwan should study math in a more difficult level while students in other countries in same grade might not need to do so. The difficulty of courses can vary, but the coverage of fields of study is wide in all countries.
The reason why I agree with the claim is that students can have a wide point of view with national curriculums of multiple fields of study. having knowledge of different fields of study makes students think widely. This ability can help them when they choose the major department in college.
However, some students are only able to focus on what they are interested in. they don’t want to waste lots of time on the field they dislike. Forcing them to take the course they are not in favor can lead to the negative effect of education.
To sum up, nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. For students that are not interested in certain fields, we can still adjust the ratio of different fields in curriculums for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Having
...urriculums of multiple fields of study. having knowledge of different fields of study ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, while, for example, of course, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 14.8657303371 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 2235.4752809 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 230.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90434782609 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54398166888 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 215.323595506 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526086956522 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 704.065955056 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9225451505 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.2 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29585098064 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110382037875 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106122612868 0.0758088955206 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188568985213 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940743499334 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 100.480337079 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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