A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
If all the students of the nation follow same national curriculum until they enter college, then it will be easy to assess the merit of the students of the nation on an equal measure.
If all the students of the nation follow same national curriculum, then students can join college or school in any state of their country. There won't be any trouble when they are assesed based on the marks obtained in their school as all students have same national curriculum.If the students of each state in the country follow different curriculum, then they might face difficulty while joining school or college in any other state. It is because the curriculum which the previous institution followed might be less relevant to the new institution. In this case, the student's merit cannot be easily assesed. If all the students study same national curriculum, then all the students of the nation will be equally trained on various aspects.
If the students of the nation follow different curriculum, then there might be case where student of one state have more syllabus coverage on their regional news rather than national news in their social studies subject. In the above case, the student of one state will be more aware of the regional news and maybe unaware of the national news.The merit of students of the nation cannot be easily compared based on their marks obtained in the school if their schools don't follow same national curriculum.
If all the states follow same curriculum, then any student can be on par with all the students across the nation and can equally compete with all the students of the nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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If all the students of the nation follow s...
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...e equally trained on various aspects If the students of the nation follow diffe...
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...obtained in the school if their schools dont follow same national curriculum If a...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...dont follow same national curriculum If all the states follow same curriculum t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 275.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81090909091 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3238725161 2.79657885939 83% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 215.323595506 46% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.363636363636 0.4932671777 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 704.065955056 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.2370786517 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 275.0 23.0359550562 1194% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 60.3974514979 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1323.0 118.986275619 1112% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 275.0 23.4991977007 1170% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.0 5.21951772744 460% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456572136661 0.243740707755 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.456572136661 0.0831039109588 549% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.372789052507 0.150359130593 248% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104268437645 0.0667264976115 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 138.7 14.1392134831 981% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -199.19 48.8420337079 -408% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 109.4 12.1743820225 899% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.1 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.11 8.38706741573 228% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 32.0 100.480337079 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 11.8971910112 471% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 112.0 11.2143820225 999% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 11.7820224719 475% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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