A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
In formal education system, every student is guided by the teacher and evaluated by their performance in examination. To evaluate every student effectively, same national curriculum throughout the country is effective. I concede the nation should have same national curriculum until they enter college for two reasons, but also have some flexibility for the local curriculum.
Same national curriculum throughout the country results homogeneity in the learning within the country. Every student is taught with same curriculum and gets evaluated by the same curriculum. The grades obtained by the students are based on the evaluation of the same curriculum and is not prejudiced. As an example two student if have been evaluated by different curriculum, one for cultural heritages and another for modern science, then both having good grades cannot be compared because of the difference in their curriculum.
Curriculum is the basis for what the student must be taught, and it must be formulated based on various factors. The curriculum must be up to date with the modern education system and must be abreast to the newly developed facts and informations in each subjects like science, managements or arts but should not be formulated based on the local political or any other kind of prejudice. The curriculum must not be free to be formulated by the local people as their wish, instead the authority should have control over the national curriculum.
However, some local curriculums are very important to be incorporated in the local community. For example, the local traditions and culture of the Mitthila culture in Province 3 in Nepal, local community must be taught to the new generation. It must be done by including the local culture in the curriculum. If the new generation is completely unaware about their history, culture, norms, mores and tradition, then those values will get extinct.
In sum, a nation should have same basic national curriculum until the student enter college throughout the country, but the locally very important subjects must be incorporated in the local curriculum as per the requirement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'results'' or 'result's'?
Suggestion: results'; result's
...ional curriculum throughout the country results homogeneity in the learning within the ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'student' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'students'.
...nd is not prejudiced. As an example two student if have been evaluated by different cur...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.3162921348 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 339.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28908554572 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89958947906 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46017699115 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0013645061 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.533333333 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302390564877 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136954956628 0.0831039109588 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125009132843 0.0758088955206 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229759846623 0.150359130593 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147155392935 0.0667264976115 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.