A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
It’s a well known fact that if you want to achieve something then your rudimentary knowledge should be strong. This topic realise the controversial issue of whether a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. I generally agree with speaker that students have to study same national curriculum until they enter college.
First of all, same national curriculum prepares students to thrive their rudimentary knowledge so that all students can compete at same level. This helps students in building common base to learn equally around the nation. Same curriculum provides disinterested level of learning for all students.
Furthermore, different students have different grasping and if nation have different curriculum they can’t be able to compete at same level. Student who have higher grasping power than another student will score more at national level competitions and entrance exams. If nation have different curriculum then they would not compete at universities entrance exam fairly.
Finally at the end, Schools may add some other subjects in the curriculum to make their students different at different levels. This will help students to learn something new from others and instigate a sense of cometition between students. Nevertheless, all students have same curriculum which brings them at same level for college entrances and other competitions.
in conclusion, nation should follow same national curriculum for the betterment of every students. Although, they can include some extra subjects or activities to instigate a sense of completion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, well, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 19.5258426966 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 248.0 442.535393258 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61290322581 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81515151345 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 215.323595506 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520161290323 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7500805584 60.3974514979 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.4285714286 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.533690374498 0.243740707755 219% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214349498741 0.0831039109588 258% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.198232343539 0.0758088955206 261% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32303162809 0.150359130593 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.190234838617 0.0667264976115 285% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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