A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Inculcating a single curriculum for the entire nation wouldn’t be a sagacious choice. It would be a tedious process and takes time to be implemented.
Firstly, by ‘inculcating’ the same curriculum throughout the nation would be advantageous in bringing uniformity among the curriculum. Doing so, the grading system helps assess the performance of the students in an equal manner.
But contradicting to this advocacy is that the competition among the peers might shoot up. Every student is competing with the students from the rest of the nation. For instance: in countries similar to India...
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flaws:
Some paragraphs are too short. better to give 5 paragraphs:
para 1: introduction
para 2: argument 1
para 3: argument 2
para 4: argument 3
para 5: conclusion
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 416 350
No. of Characters: 2158 1500
No. of Different Words: 220 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.57 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.95 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.832 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 163 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 127 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 87 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.957 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.725 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.565 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.28 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.565 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.071 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5