A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
As Albert Einstein rightfully said, "You cannot expect a fish to climb a tree", the same way, you cannot expect every student to have proficiency in same subjects. A majority of students are dealing with depression due to the expectations society has of them. Society, as it is, gives the student a lot of norms and regulations to follow and top of it all also expects them to be equally smart.
A majority of people in entertainment business have majored in a technical field, which denotes how, even people who have no need for technical knowledge, had to study in order to satisfy the social expectations. These are the same people, which when asked, wouldn't necessarily remember what they were taught. Which tells us one thing; teaching the students the same curriculum may not always make them knowledgeable about the topic. Personal interest is a major criteria in one's intelligence.
Having said that, knowledge about the basic things; such as basic algebra, geography or even social science is helpful in the future. One will not always carry a calculator or a compass even with this evolving technology. In such situations, knowledge will always help. The biology which is taught in high school, may actually save someone's life. Giving the example of the fish and the tree may seem smart at first, but upon closer inspection, you see its faults. It is comparing two completely different species. Every fish has to learn how to swim and every monkey has to learn how to climb in order to survive. Similarly, every human must have basic knowledge to survive.
It is fair to conclude that not every child is same, but in order to get by in life, they must be equipped to deal with various issues they face in life. Opting out of same curriculum is as same as chopping off a bird's wings
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'expectations'' or 'expectation's'?
Suggestion: expectations'; expectation's
... are dealing with depression due to the expectations society has of them. Society, as it is,...
Line 2, column 258, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
... are the same people, which when asked, wouldnt necessarily remember what they were tau...
Line 2, column 475, Rule ID: ONES
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
...ersonal interest is a major criteria in ones intelligence. Having said that, knowle...
Line 3, column 514, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
...aring two completely different species. Every fish has to learn how to swim and every...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, similarly, so, as to, even so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 312.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78525641026 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62990681308 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5199694706 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8235294118 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129031519841 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375308678782 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428793194337 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858302709362 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472528086362 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.