A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Curriculum plays a vital role in the education system. In my opinion a nation should follow same curriculum for all the students until they enter college. It serves as a building block of the students and nation future. A nation has variety of people belongs to different culture, religion, languages, caste, creed and other. To choose same curriculum this will help to reduce the difference between people, as people belongs to same educational background throughout the nation then definitely there in increase in there credence.
School not provides the basic knowledge to the students but also helps to develop physical and mental ability of the students. Now, a day’s school is not only limited to subjective knowledge, but a lot of extracurricular activity also teaches on the regular basic, which helps to improve the overall development of the students, curriculum varies. On the other hand, college contain multifarious course for the students, they can choose their subject according to their area of interest and can make their career in that particular field. After school, student is mature enough to choose their fields as he/she studied all the basics subjects in the school.
Students having different capability some are good in education while the others are in sports, and the scenario is same for throughout the nation and one cannot deny in that. In school, at the primary level the students get the basic knowledge about the subjects like English, Hindi, Mathematics, Science, Social and others. Same curriculum will provide the same platform and opportunity for the students after their school. The environment become fair and students belong to different region able to grab the opportunity. For example : Two different states of India name Bihar and Kerala, there is a huge curriculum gap between the two states, students from Kerala are much knowledgeable that the Bihar, because of this students belongs to Kerala are more able to occupy the place in top university and this will also lead to the development of that particular state, because education is directly related to the employment rate and living status.
In conclusion, Nation has to follow the same curriculum throughout the nation, this will provide the same platform for all the students, also lead to unite the people of different, caste, culture and creed, also develop the same understanding between the same age group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2039.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22820512821 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69102326571 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497435897436 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.4694303841 60.3974514979 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.933333333 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328204754508 0.243740707755 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12806137884 0.0831039109588 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140917068124 0.0758088955206 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222128881307 0.150359130593 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132909908675 0.0667264976115 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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