A NATIONAL CIRRUCULUM SHOULD BE TAUGHT TO ALL CHILDREN UNTILL THEY GO TO COLLEGE.
The author gave his opinion that the students in the nation should study the same national curriculum until they enter college and to have pragmatic look at this issue it is good decision which can be implemented for the students.
To have a look at their positive sides in a religious and diversified country like India there is always a need of bringing all the people of different religions,caste and creed together under one roof of nationality its always been a tidious task to do.There is a need of establishing a naional curriculum and to be taught to students to stop the vilifiying effects like creates space between people by differentiating them on curriculums like state board, central board or an international board.Instead of all these the national curriculum should have specified and importants law and order topics that should be followed by all the people in the country and this should be rooted into their minds deeply even from the stage of kids because that is the stage where they will start learning and adapting things easily so we should try to make them adapt to nationality on terms of equality and to make them audacious by nature.
The national curriculum should comprise of international language like English and our national language Hindi and the last option should be their regional language because if we implement only English and Hindi many of the regional languages will loose their existance which is not at all a good sign.
Since students will somehow choose their career options only after school like they select their subjects based on their interests like people choose a medical background or an engineering or a degree or a research or any kinds of business only after schooling which means until then we can teach them everything that is essential to handle their lives in their selected streams so implementing a national curriculum will serve this purpose on whole because all the people will be taught in the same way and same skills in school and they will be treated same like for example in a garden all the plants will be following the same steps like sowing seeds in the mud,watering them,giving them enough sunlight to grow and later on the fruits or flowers that they give is based on their type.In the same way all the students are nurtured in the same way until they excell themselves after school in the college.
This kind of practice will make people to forget their barriers like government school children have a bad curriculum and private school children have a better curriculum and all of those will be vanished and create an equity among students and make them more confident about their ownself.Because many of the people in India are facing many problems even in colleges because students who studied in regional language curriculum are unable to match with the other curriculum students like for example a student from a poor village school who studied a state curriculum in his regional language Telugu could not cope it up with the students who studies Central board curriculum in English and a barrier is created which makes the student from poor village backgroung not eligible to get a better paid jobs or a better living.
This will be the main reason for rich and poor biases and will prevail in the same way until national curriculum is established and all are taught equally because education is the right of every citizen of the country with out any biases on any basis.And being a citizen of the country they should have respect towards national laws and be accountable to his nationality and responsibilties in the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, for example, kind of, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 14.8657303371 222% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 98.0 58.6224719101 167% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3000.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 615.0 442.535393258 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87804878049 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97987886753 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63967601871 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.419512195122 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 942.3 704.065955056 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 102.0 23.0359550562 443% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 293.433931614 60.3974514979 486% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 500.0 118.986275619 420% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 102.5 23.4991977007 436% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.21951772744 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267902606691 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170173046136 0.0831039109588 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683357377113 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170173046136 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683357377113 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 52.8 14.1392134831 373% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.59 48.8420337079 -48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 41.9 12.1743820225 344% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.21 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.39 8.38706741573 136% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 42.8 11.2143820225 382% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.7820224719 246% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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