In order for any work of art for example a film a novel a poem or a song to have merit it must be understandable to most people

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In order for any work of art — for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song — to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.

The statement suggests that to gain merit for work of art for example, movies, songs or novel etc. The work of art must be understood by majority of people. Fundamentally I agree with this statement, as it ticks all the criteria for a true statement. Pragmatic situations are present which justifies this statement.

Considering the major fans and critics of the movie, novel or song, the merit of the above-mentioned work of art depends on how cogent or acceptable the work of art is. For instance, Avengers movie series which is a huge hit, fans and movie experts also rate this movie highly. Because it connects with the feeling of the people so well. Majority of people love this movie from around the world. The success of Avengers movie as a series can be seen in the I.M.D.B rating itself, which is highly rated. When we consider a work of art, it must be understandable by the viewers, because then mostly the show, movie or song gains praise and acknowledgement. Many movies turn to flops because of poor describing of plot, meaning and in the case of songs when there is no tune, melody the song becomes a flop. Thereby, not gaining any merit, but instead gets bad reviews and taunted by the movie critics and viewers. So, fundamentally this statement is true, but this is not true in some cases.

The exceptions of this statement can be inferred from the recent Oscar awards. The movie "Parasite" which was honored with the highest number of Oscar awards, was such a kind of movie, which majority of people did not hear of and the movie is also very difficult to understand. The plot of the movie was very deep for some people , for some people it went totally over the head, still the movie was able to get 4 Oscar's which was the highest number of Oscars given to the movie during 2019.Basically the point here is Oscars only nominate those movies which show a deep and very well correlated idea. In this case to gain merit, though many people around the world could not understand the movie it still received the merit.

Furthermore, another exception is with the artist Eminem's rap songs. Eminem raps at such a high speed which leaves people in awe. His song "Rap God" garnered huge praise, for how fast he was able to speak words and gave it a proper meaning. Though majority of people while hearing it did not understand a bit about the song, they were all in the awe for the speed and the tone of the song. Eminem's another song "Godzilla" which was relaxed after "Rap God", was even faster compared to "Rap God". Saying about an astounding number of words per minute in that song. In this case also people did not understand a word when they heard the song. Only a bunch full of people may have understood the song on the first go. But still due to beats and speed of Eminem this song was a success. These are some scenarios in which the statement may not hold true.

In conclusion, the statement is fundamentally correct for most of works of art. But some exceptions are present as discussed above which will make the statement look vague. But ultimately the number of exceptions is very less compared to normal situations, where a work of art is a huge success or gains merit only when it is understood by majority of people.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, so, still, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in some cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2723.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 582.0 442.535393258 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67869415808 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91168771031 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63821719052 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441580756014 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 838.8 704.065955056 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.5286554668 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7666666667 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279083250629 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857485050444 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878084882899 0.0758088955206 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179273807021 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621072267388 0.0667264976115 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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