As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Imagine waking up in the morning late because the alarm clock is turned-off. The lights of the house don’t work and nor cellphones or wi-fi. The coffee brewing machine does not work and one did not receive any newspaper that day. It feels so incomplete to even imagine this. This is the impact of technology on human mankind. Technology has made the world shrink in size.
Recent study among the age group of 5-15 years have suggested that the kids born in the 90’s decade were less smarter and had less awareness as compared to the kids born in 21st century. The need to open the book to find a historic event or a dictionary to look for a meaning of a word or a simple atlas is not required. Everything is easily available over a click. Technology has impacted the current generation with more common sense as they have brain activities in almost everything they do.
In Contrast to the statement, Technology has also raised new issues and arguments. If there are Televisions, there is mirroring and digital media and televisions that are smart. When there are phones, there is another issue to make it smarter. When there is car, there arises a problem of fuel conservation. Technology has spread it legs like a spider in all directions. Medical field and introduction to new vaccines has given human mankind a new ray of hope in the field of medicine. There is WebMD that provides simple solutions to the health problems on a click avoiding to visit a doctor.
Furthermore, studies have shown that manufacturing of a simple steel glass earlier used to take upto 5 days where as now in 5 days one can manufacture 1000 pieces of steel glasses. Technology has made ones life fill with leisure. The construction of the buildings and bridges and not to forget underground subways and metro station have become possible because of technology.
Human imaginations has finally hit the block of reality and now we can see the progress in the course of time. Eradication of small pox entirely in the 20th century was a goal achieved in the field of Medicine because of the technological development around the globe. This gave rise to spreading the word amongst more and more people resulting in the eradication of once an epidemic
Starting from stone age and making fire to the new age and discussing black holes and nanotechnology, technology, over the year has taken a drastic step. Its is a cosmos in itself. Switching on AC at home by sitting in office was once a dream. Now this has become reality. Every side has two coins but the pros are larger over the years than cons when in comes to Technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less smart'?
Suggestion: less smart
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoiding visiting'.
Suggestion: avoiding visiting
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...han cons when in comes to Technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, look, so, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2174.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 458.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74672489083 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68881121773 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56768558952 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 700.2 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.6855023455 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5185185185 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.962962963 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.74074074074 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115747796528 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0248486190841 0.0831039109588 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367088728878 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0543112856806 0.150359130593 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463690923277 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.