As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Direction: Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Technology is an invention or creation that helps to improve the original way of doing things. It has enhanced positively our immediate environment and the world. Technology has stimulated an enormous range of learning and unlocked the inherent potential to think beyond boundaries. I therefore disagree with the author who indicated that as more people rely on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will diminish.
The world has become global and advanced due to technological inclinations. This inclination to technology has provoked intense learning. For example, a child growing up likes playing with a toy car, dull babies and bicycle, which are all products of technology. They rely so much on this as a form of entertainment but this actually develops their thought process. They remain so inquisitive and begin to imagine new ways of doing things or creating other form of the technology they have been exposed to.
Furthermore, before the advent of technology humans needed to move from one location to another. The means of transportation was by foot, trekking long distances for days. This era passed because the challenge associated with this method stimulated the thought process of humans to solve the problem of stress and time wasted on the journey. This thought process has enabled humans to attain significant progress as we moved away from trekking by foot to using donkeys, horses and now cars, train, aero planes. Technology has also been an enabler in every field of study helping to formulate new theories made possible with deep thinking.
Though, the reliance on technology also have its negative effect on the society. For example, students prefer using calculator to carry out mathematical calculations instead of doing manual calculations that will help their thought process. The reliance on calculator has encouraged laziness and caused loss of creativity. it is also eroding the culture of hard work and values propagated by our parents. This can be corrected by introducing some restriction on the use of calculator for students.
Finally, the benefits associated with reliance on technology is huge and will only get better as humans continue to think of ways to make our world a better place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ies made possible with deep thinking. Though, the reliance on technology also have i...
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Line 7, column 325, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...laziness and caused loss of creativity. it is also eroding the culture of hard wor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23561643836 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8454188324 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580821917808 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8177606598 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.55 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200457412889 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552220032609 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883174090242 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113366883736 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781276557374 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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