As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate

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...ter then move to post office to send it.This letter will post to your family member ...
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...st to your family member by post master.That system kills lot of times.But technolog...
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...t master.That system kills lot of times.But technology makes it more easier.By tech...
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...ls lot of times.But technology makes it more easier.By technology you can easily send a tex...
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...mes.But technology makes it more easier.By technology you can easily send a text t...
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...t to your family member at a short time.So I mostly disagree that as people rely m...
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...matters and solve these in a short time.Without it we cannt think or solve one single c...
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... or solve one single complicated matter.Without it we arent able to solve the problem i...
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...single complicated matter.Without it we arent able to solve the problem instantly. ...
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.... In primeable time it was just a dream.Day by day fuels concentration over the wor...
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...d is going down.with technology we made a alternative way of fuels for running ou...
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...echnology we cannt make our life easily.By technology we can do many jobs in a tim...
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...echnology we can do many jobs in a time.Thats why as people rely more and more on tec...
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...echnology we can do many jobs in a time.Thats why as people rely more and more on tec...
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...and more on technology to solve problem.It does not mean that the bility of humans...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 19.5258426966 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 2235.4752809 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 209.0 442.535393258 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85167464115 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92433364985 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 215.323595506 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 704.065955056 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 23.0359550562 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.580632152 60.3974514979 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 202.8 118.986275619 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.8 23.4991977007 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437712480989 0.243740707755 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.230068028625 0.0831039109588 277% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171866596573 0.0758088955206 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281093794911 0.150359130593 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154693406361 0.0667264976115 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 14.1392134831 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 48.8420337079 61% => OK
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 12.1743820225 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.74 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 100.480337079 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.8971910112 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 11.2143820225 164% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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