As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of
humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and
explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting
your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might
not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
As the technological savy era is advancing day by day, debate on the pros and cons on the increase in use of technology is also heating up. One should not forget that technology is the invention of humans itself therefore, it depends on the human ability rather than our ability depends on technology.
The pros of technology are more stronger than its cons.Technology not only helps in easing the complex problems but also helps in exploring more innovative methods and ideas, as well as opening up the new world for many people.Because of technology I am giving the computer based GRE exam which is more convinent in conducting as well in evaluating as compared to paper basedIn the conventional time it was not easy to travel but now people can travel to different places easily with the help of GPS technology.
Enhancement in ease of doing business is one of the important example of the benifits of technology. Peopleat distances can be connected to each other at the same time and can easily share their ideas. Wise people are actually taking up the oppurtunity of this technological era, and has lead to the rise of new mult-billion startups and entruprenuers.
Its the technology only which has given us the access to things which we otherwise could not access.Nonethless, its easy to make things benificial than to misuse them but still people choose the latter one. If we are addicted to something then someway or the other it will going to effect us, no matter if its water too; if we drink water more than the required amount or in excess, it will definitely be harmful for our health.Similarly, if we misuse or use technology excessively, it will definitely deteriorate our thinking ability. But if we use it in the right way, it willprove to be a blessing for us.
Using technology efficiently does not deteriorate our thinking ability but enhances it. Therefore, technolgy makes our lives easy and time efficient.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...technology. The pros of technology are more stronger than its cons.Technology not only helps...
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Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Technology
...hnology are more stronger than its cons.Technology not only helps in easing the complex pr...
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Line 2, column 227, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Because
...pening up the new world for many people.Because of technology I am giving the computer ...
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Line 2, column 363, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing as well in evaluating as compared to paper basedIn the conventional time it w...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...lt-billion startups and entruprenuers. Its the technology only which has given us ...
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Line 4, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nonethless
...ngs which we otherwise could not access.Nonethless, its easy to make things benificial tha...
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Line 4, column 273, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...thing then someway or the other it will going to effect us, no matter if its water to...
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Line 4, column 428, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Similarly
...ll definitely be harmful for our health.Similarly, if we misuse or use technology excessi...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s our lives easy and time efficient.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, similarly, so, still, then, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 330.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87878787879 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01770715508 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539393939394 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.857792075 60.3974514979 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.363636364 118.986275619 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 5.21951772744 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177237085666 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581254480674 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459877759072 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888337456197 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419238089976 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.8971910112 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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