People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
To have ability to make decision is very necessary and based on your decision consequence depend. The decision taken by people can be emotional or logical based. Above statement claim when one make decision based on emotion will likely to regret in upcoming time, which I certainly agree with it because decision making is cognitive method in which you have consider every aspect of situation then come to final decision.
Firstly, decision which are emotional can be beneficial in short span of time but can have adverse effect in future. Emotional decision does not allow people to think situation at very angle but rather with small information they make decision which contrite. For instances, consider an example of small institution which is working under heavy loss, makeover over losses they made one suggested to layoffs some there employee are not needed but chief executive officer of institution decided not to layoff the employee. He think by remove their employee is morally wrong. Here decision taken emotionally to not layoff and gain trust of employees but in later year company shutdown because they can not afford to pay expenses of the company.So,he regret his decision of not removing employee in last years.
Secondly, decision taken based on logical reasoning are likely to not beneficial in short period of time but can have larger impact in future. It is because situation is scrutinize well and every consequence and effect are consider before coming to the decision. For instances , decision taken bu indian government to banned the high currency note effect various middle class people because of standing in queue to deposite note and shortage of money supply in market which led to decreases in overall business. However,in long run it help country, from black money that individual is having.
Lastly, sometimes decision which are emotionally taken are more beneficial than logical like decision involving family are likely to have emotional touch in it. For instances considered situation in which your brother runout of money and asked you for financial time but at same time real estate price decrease and you are willing to buy house since long time. Here it is good to take decision which is emotional and provide financial support to your brother which he needed desperately.
In conclusion , decision which are taken by logical reasoning for more convincing than decision which are taken considering the emotional aspect of the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2086.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20199501247 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57179480662 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496259351621 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5787832196 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.375 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0625 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346948952852 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148308861319 0.0831039109588 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120553290724 0.0758088955206 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237481235886 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10095700678 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.