People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situations or surrounding than by society as a whole.
Does the attitude of the people depends on the immediate situations or surrounding or it is dependent on the society
which he/she belongs. This is a complex issue. However the nature and attitude of any person is largely dependent
on the society in which he/she grows and brought up. But there are certain situations in which it is very much
dependent on the immediate and surrounding situations. I consider the author's statement is far more
correct from my point of view because the immediate circumstances and environment is very much dependent
in the attitude of the people rather the society factor.
The first reason that supports the claim is that in the fast developing world it is very much necessary to be
with the latest advancement of the technology and situations. If a person wants to do only what his/her societies
ancestor did than it is very difficult to survive in this fast growing environment. Thus the attitude of the people is
dependent more on the immediate situations than the society.
The world is filled with certain examples that encountered the more impact of the immediate situations rather than
the society. Consider the example of Mahatma Gandhi, who was a prominent lawyer and was brought up in an
typical gujarat society who always stays happy in its own life. But the train incident which took place in South Africa
has changed his view of seeing the world. After that incident he made up his mind to fight for the truth and give
justice to the society. If the train incident would have not happened than it would be a different scenario
and Indians would have not got the Mohandas Gandhi as a Father Of The Nation but as a lawyer. Thus immediate situations
play very important roles in the life rather than the society.
The other reason to take into consideration is that the immediate situations and circumstances play a vital role in
the development of the persons attitude. Scientific research has also shown great evidences that the attitude of the
people is dependent more on the immediate actions and situations. There is apotheosis saying that 'the fruit changes its color seeing
the color of the surrounding fruit'. This a well said proverb clearly states that it is the surrounding environment
that changes the attitude of the people rather than the society.
Despite this all claims the confluence of society on the nature, behavior and attitude is also immense. The society in
which a person borns and is brought up teaches him/her many things which are the ethics of his life and hence plays a
vital role in the attitude of the people.
Summing up all these claims the authors claim regarding the determination of attitude is a skeptical issue.
But I consider that the society plays a vital role in the determination of the peoples attitude but it is more influenced
by the immediate situations. And hence the people's attitude are determined by their immediate situations than by society as a whole.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'thus', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.251893939394 0.240241500013 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.153409090909 0.157235817809 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0852272727273 0.0880659088768 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0473484848485 0.0497285424764 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.032196969697 0.0444667217837 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128787878788 0.12292977631 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0340909090909 0.0406280797675 84% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7030697238 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0113636363636 0.030933414821 37% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0094696969697 0.0016655270985 569% => OK
Determiners: 0.159090909091 0.0997080785238 160% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00568181818182 0.0249443105267 23% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0227272727273 0.0148568991511 153% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3001.0 2732.02544248 110% => OK
No of words: 503.0 452.878318584 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9662027833 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.58838876751 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355864811133 0.366273622748 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.278330019881 0.280924506359 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182902584493 0.200843997647 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119284294235 0.132149295362 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7030697238 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 219.290929204 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.395626242545 0.48968727796 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.7684231691 55.4138127331 81% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6194690265 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.8695652174 23.380412469 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7123559453 59.4972553346 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.47826087 141.124799967 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8695652174 23.380412469 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.434782608696 0.674092028746 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 28.0 4.94800884956 566% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 31.0 5.21349557522 595% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 49.7025672055 51.4728631049 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.78048780488 1.64882698954 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14478835585 0.391690518653 37% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.162138586639 0.123202303941 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.104915681914 0.077325440228 136% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.756657728892 0.547984918172 138% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.216649903149 0.149214159877 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834758393978 0.161403998019 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111000443911 0.0892212321368 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.218769680355 0.385218514788 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0900848240956 0.0692045440612 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754775131788 0.275328986314 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102541468629 0.0653680567796 157% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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