People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting

"Your behavior is your responsibility", one can find this line trite in several offices. No matter what the circumstances are, only you are the one to make call of how you present yourself. That is why the statement can be firmly refuted. Several explanations can be given against the statement.

What differentiates people from other people? To begin with, it is how they behave. And their behavior is majorly determined by the choices they make. People have a common cognition but their response differs, like some people can be tempted to chastise subordinates over a blunder while others might honestly point them their mistake and then cheer them up for not making such mistakes again. The differentiating term is their decision the take next, this is what is referred as behavior.

Moreover, peoples image of themselves has a huge impact on people's behavior, you will find rich people egotist and philistine about others. On the other hand a poor guy can be more benign and kind. A successful man will be more humble and a less frequent achiever will be critical. Additionally, Internal peace plays an important role in deciding how people behave. You would normally find old people's behavior more mature and stable than the teenagers. It is the peace of mind which these elderly have achieved and the youngsters lack, which plays an important role in discreetness in their behavior.
Introspection largely determines how one behaves, noting own's mistakes and finding out why we react in a particular way under certain circumstances helps us understand more about our-self. Take for example, introvert people typically are introspective of themselves that is why we rarely find any introvert guy misbehaving.

However, with support to the statement, one can say that external factors like past experiences also define how one behaves. Which is true. It is our experience that guides us in precarious situations, where the difference between right and wrong is obfuscated. For instance, when a kid feels cheated or daunted or scared he has different ways of responding to the situation.

In addition, to support of the statement we can also say the certain circumstances and people affect the way we behave. A girl might go crazy in presence her crush, or, as it is known to many of us that hungry people tend to be more angry, or, someone happy about a particular thing might be ephemerally kind. But, at the end it is us who decide weather to express or not to express these evanescent feelings.

Conclusively, it depends on us majorly how we behave. As stated above that external factors might impact our reactions and decisions but at the last it our call. We can let go of anger or any other malevolent feeling and behave in more genteel way.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 80, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
... one can say that external factors like past experiences also define how one behaves. Which is t...
Line 8, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...xperiences also define how one behaves. Which is true. It is our experience that guid...

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, honestly, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2317.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 464.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99353448276 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88927448808 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538793103448 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 729.0 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.740449438202 405% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.9980246523 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8148148148 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1851851852 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92592592593 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219120161251 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586160735154 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517396589123 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095934014447 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609458919279 0.0667264976115 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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