Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Science and technology have played a vital role in every historical change that has been brought in our society. We can not think of the modern world without the contribution of science. The prompt states that science and technology will one day able to solve all society's problems. In my opinion, this statement is exaggerated.
Society consists of human beings. It is human, not a machine that builds a society. The ethics and moral principle of society are gradually developed by the people of it. However, human society is beset with many problems that can not only be solved by the advances of science and technology. Gender discrimination, poverty, racism are the major problems that the current world is facing. Only science and technology can not change this aspect alone. To exemplify, if we want to talk about the countries that are technologically advanced, America will come first. The people of America have struggled a lot to mitigate racism. They have a long history of anti-racism movement. But it is still a major problem for this country. Recently a black guy named Floyd has been killed by a white policeman. As a result, protests, and movement disseminates throughout the country, even in a global pandemic the situation was hard to control. Gender discrimination is another problem that cannot be attributable to science. It is the mindset and attitude of men towards women that are needed to be changed. Even in many third world countries, many well established but conservative family prohibit their women from doing outside jobs or taking higher education.
Moreover, the authority or government of a society plays a notable role in this regard, For example, poverty in third world countries is a major problem not because that they are technologically backward, but only because they are corrupted. So the ethics and moral principle of the leadership of society also play a crucial role. Science can not make human honest.
Someone may argue that technology has brought such changes that were once beyond imagination. If this development and advancement go at such a pace, every problem will be solved. Well, it is true that technology has brought peace in our lives. they have solved many of our problems. We can now contact each other from one country to another easily. But it is also true that nowadays youth trends to be more confined to a laptop or virtual world, which make them unsocial and self-centered.
In conclusion, I would say that it is the intention of a society which determines, which way society will progress. For sure science and technology will help us in this regard, But they are not the main factor. The goodwill of human will play a key role.
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- Most people are taught that loyalty is a virtue But loyalty whether to one s friends to one s school or place of employment or to any institution is all too often a destructive rather than a positive force 58
- Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society s problems 50
- The most effective way to understand contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 245, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, third, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2255.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 454.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96696035242 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78550421791 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3239574914 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7419354839 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6451612903 23.4991977007 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.67741935484 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388309080089 0.243740707755 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848948193524 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117381626744 0.0758088955206 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217207849774 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828704979746 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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