Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Any business to be successful depends on the society’s cooperation. So both business and society are correlated to each other. For any organization profit should be the main goal but without considering society’s well being should not be their vision. In my opinion every organization should give back something good to the society improvement. From which in return they may get a greater support from society to their organization. Which definitely ensures the sustainability of the organization.
In this century corporations are the main part of the society. Due to lot of opportunities and demand many corporation makes a huge profit and pay good amount of tax for the government. Which helps in the economic development of the country, but with this organization should also show some interest in helping the society by giving back some proportion of profit for well being of the society. For example Mr Azim Premji the founder of Wipro company contribute large amount of profit for the development of the society such as giving free education, free healthcare, running orphanages through their NGOs which definitely directly and indirectly helps the society.
In other hand due to a lot of job opportunities in private sector people travel from one place to another place because of which the population of that particular city increases drastically. Subsequently it also increases the pollution of the city. So private organization should also focus their concentration to curb the pollution which is majorly contributed because of their organization. For example Bangalore contributes approximately 40% of software companies present in India Because of which there is a tremendous increase in the software engineers in the city and due to this there is a lot of traffic related problems created in the major corridors in and around IT parks of the city during peak hours. So to reduce this problem all private organization decided to vary the office timings which ultimately results to reduce the traffic of particular duration of the day.
On the other hand, some people think that corporation’s responsibility is only to make profit. Of course it is important, however they can use some part of that profit to environmental works and charities which definitely increase their dignity.
In conclusion, profit is important for survival of any company but indulging in promoting society well being definitely assured there a sustainability incoming future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Subsequently,
... particular city increases drastically. Subsequently it also increases the pollution of the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, of course, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2084.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 392.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31632653061 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1048213572 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484693877551 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.9482312633 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.777777778 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198946010664 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720525592641 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698543882727 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127648459217 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707054694876 0.0667264976115 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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