There is some information which publics think they have rights to know while the governments would tend to withhold them for many reasons. A discussion of governments' right to put something in secret is important since it also concerns people's right. In my stance, I support that governments and presidents have the right to hide some information from publics for the following reasons.
First of all, some information might cause unnecessary public panic. For instance, a really famous disease, called Ebola virus, which can easily cause death and still no technology and medical care can comprehend the mechanism, was extreme broadcast and introduce by media in most nations. Then, many people worried about the Ebola and hope the some health care organizations could solve it. However, actually Ebola did not invade America and no Americans get Ebola. Therefore, the information of Ebola can be kept as an African disease, but not severe as media broadcast it as a national wide outbreak.
Moreover, national confidentiality should not be disclosed to publics and other countries since they relate to the whole nation's safety. To illustrate, most countries would protect the information about military technology and facilities. Once this information be apprehended by publics, other countries could easily get them, too. In this way, this behavior provides other countries the information to intrude and pose a giant threaten in the country's safety. Thus, some information have their reasons to be kept as necessary.
Admittedly, people have their rights to know what happen and what the governments are doing. Notwithstanding, this right might bring the whole country into chaos since it might cause irrational panic and harm the country's safety. After evaluating all the pros and cons thoroughly, I support that maintain the stable and peace of a country is more important than the desire to comprehend all information of a country.
To sum up, there are many reasons, such as public panic concern, national safety, and protection of nation's rights, which could support that presidents should withhold some crucial information as necessary.
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
The fourth paragraph is like a conclusion for the second and third paragraph.
No. of Words: 339 350 //More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 339 350
No. of Characters: 1768 1500
No. of Different Words: 169 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.291 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.215 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.766 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 124 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 97 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 70 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 52 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.941 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.231 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.588 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.335 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.572 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.094 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...le worried about the Ebola and hope the some health care organizations could solve i...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'moreover', 'really', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'for instance', 'such as', 'first of all', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247368421053 0.240241500013 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.15 0.157235817809 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0921052631579 0.0880659088768 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0473684210526 0.0497285424764 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0342105263158 0.0444667217837 77% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0894736842105 0.12292977631 73% => OK
Participles: 0.0184210526316 0.0406280797675 45% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.83152960235 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0315789473684 0.030933414821 102% => OK
Particles: 0.00263157894737 0.0016655270985 158% => OK
Determiners: 0.102631578947 0.0997080785238 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0342105263158 0.0249443105267 137% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0131578947368 0.0148568991511 89% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2154.0 2732.02544248 79% => OK
No of words: 339.0 452.878318584 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.35398230088 6.0361032391 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.380530973451 0.366273622748 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.30383480826 0.280924506359 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.227138643068 0.200843997647 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.156342182891 0.132149295362 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83152960235 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 219.290929204 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519174041298 0.48968727796 106% => OK
Word variations: 54.6407145843 55.4138127331 99% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 19.9411764706 23.380412469 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9283783236 59.4972553346 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.705882353 141.124799967 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 23.380412469 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.674092028746 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 50.3246572965 51.4728631049 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.53409090909 1.64882698954 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305397121691 0.391690518653 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.114388908967 0.123202303941 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0490498818466 0.077325440228 63% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.558570446847 0.547984918172 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.165196742715 0.149214159877 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121128903257 0.161403998019 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592690823418 0.0892212321368 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.199669861331 0.385218514788 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0601929733955 0.0692045440612 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194713127124 0.275328986314 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575345064071 0.0653680567796 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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