Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns

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Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.

Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented above.

The debate between the role of morality and logical reasoning in teaching instructions may well be a heated one. Some may argue that morality should be left for churches or religion. But, any education that focuses solely on logical reasoning without moral training is not complete.

It is true that young people form most of their habits and ideologies from childhood into adulthood. During childhood, they are pliable. They can be set straight and be taught the right way to go. And in most part of the world, children begin to form certain habits and worldviews from elementary schools. Now,if we base education only on logical reasoning, we cannot simply hope that these children will automatically develop their moral senses along the way. A child who sees nothing wrong with stealing from childhood may well ratiocinate that stealing is not an ignoble thing since he or she has not been instructed otherwise.

Therefore, a person whose foundation has been based on pure logic will continue that rationalize his behaviours whether good or bad. It has even been said by certain psychologists that when somebody commit crime, even after they are caught, they still believe they are doing the right thing.

Moreover, the view that basing teaching on a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society is even more disturbing. Many corrupt and unscrupulous businessmen and politicians all over the world today are not just those with avant garde education, but also those with impeccable academic credentials. What that tells us is that there is no causal relationship between logical reasoning and morality-both areas are independent.For instance, a child that is taught about the principle of electromagnetic induction may as well grasp the specificity of such field, but will that automatically make that child not to engage in ignoble acts?

Ultimately, logical reasoning and morality should not be mutually exclusive. A complete education should make pupils ratiocinate and reason logically about issues and at the same instruct about teachings on right and wrong.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 337.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25222551929 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82258399804 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587537091988 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6030392981 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.625 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269171427879 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904596337123 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104518355429 0.0758088955206 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148777429627 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744797388475 0.0667264976115 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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