"The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but the general welfare of all its people."
The greatness of a nation largely depends on it’s mass people and so the general welfare of all it’s people rather than the achievements of it’s rulers ,artists or scientists, being the indicator of such virtue is more plausible.
To be called great ,a nation must meet some criterias.it needs to be enriched in respect of culture ,economy and society. All these aspects require general welfare of mass people to be nourished and enriched. So, it is undeniable that greatness of a nation depends on general welfare of it’s people.
On the other hand,the achievements of the nation’s rulers,artists or scientists play a vital role to build the nation and enrich it socially,culturally and economically,there is no doubt about that.But all these accolades will bear an effect in bulding a great nation only if these achievements bring the nation different forms of prosperity and welfare.
It is true that history recognizes the great nations like greeks,romans through the achivements of it’s scholars.But all those achievements weren’t mere achievements.Rather all those gains in one way or another lead the nation through a process of welfare.the reigns of great emperors , the masterpieces of artists like Ven Gogh or the great inventions of scientists like Tomas Alva D Edison are nothing if they didn’t take their nation to the road of prosperity along with them.
It is therefore spurious that the surest indicator of the greatness of a nation not the achievements of its rulers , artists or scientists but the general welfare of all its people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, no doubt, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 2235.4752809 60% => OK
No of words: 253.0 442.535393258 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32806324111 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33270120881 2.79657885939 119% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 215.323595506 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525691699605 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 704.065955056 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 141.553047675 60.3974514979 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 192.571428571 118.986275619 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.1428571429 23.4991977007 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.21951772744 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.538457672503 0.243740707755 221% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.272020197725 0.0831039109588 327% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132809168601 0.0758088955206 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323812890979 0.150359130593 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104129741516 0.0667264976115 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 14.1392134831 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.