The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
A nation is not defined merely by its land or boundaries but by it's citizens. Even the wealthiest countries have always given importance to the welfare of its people. I disagree with the fact that rulers, artists or scientists represent the greatness of a nation.
Nowadays, most countries are run by governments unlike some where the monarchies still exist. The rulers, if I might, can be the highermost officials of the government who oversee all its activities. These governments, especially if its democratic, are fuelled by the money of a layman. So if the general prosperity of the residents are not taken into account, the governments struggle to function which inturn deters the nation's growth. A scientific research, to be successfully carried out needs funding, bulk of which usually comes from the governments. Hence, scientists are also trasitively dependent on the common folk. Similar is the case with artists, whose job is to appease the masses and get paid in return to the quality of their work.
Mahatma Gandhi, the father of India, once said that "Praise the soldier, Praise the farmer" because it cannot be denied that these two are the backbones of any nation. One third of the entire world's population is suffering from hunger, which is enough to validate the fact that a farmer plays an imminent role in supporting a nation. Likewise, each person has a important role to play and contributes to the overall growth of a country, no matter how small the contribution might be. Be it an engineer, a lawyer, a doctor, a social worker, or an athlete, their achievements can indeed make a nation proud. However, is it also important to recognize the contribution of scientists and their inventions in improving the quality of life of the public.
While it might be presumptuous to say that a small minority represents the entire nation, we can safely say that comprehensive growth of all the residents of a nation pays well on the longer run.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'disagree that'.
Suggestion: disagree that
...ortance to the welfare of its people. I disagree with the fact that rulers, artists or scientists represent...
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Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: SOME_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somewhere'?
Suggestion: somewhere
...countries are run by governments unlike some where the monarchies still exist. The rulers,...
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Line 3, column 423, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...gle to function which inturn deters the nations growth. A scientific research, to be su...
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Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
... of any nation. One third of the entire worlds population is suffering from hunger, wh...
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Line 5, column 371, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ing a nation. Likewise, each person has a important role to play and contributes ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, likewise, so, still, third, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 331.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97885196375 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91361496458 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577039274924 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5144984047 60.3974514979 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231799023532 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745229097384 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799258196354 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158049641391 0.150359130593 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133201890305 0.0667264976115 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.