The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Yes , the surest indicator of a great nation is represented by general welfare of a nation's people.
A nation is formed by the people and for the people , A Nation's wealth , pride , legacy and it's status are all determined by
people of a nation.I strongly advocate that a nation with a ruler who is concerned for the welfare of people will be a great nation forever
this can be refuted with various examples.
A ruler of country can achieve a lot , but if the achievments are no way relevent to welfare of citizen or to the nation , its no way a an achievement for ruler rather an achievment for an individual.
one must keep this mind,A ruler is different from an individual, a ruler can be defined as a mother of nation taking care thier scions same applies for the scientist.
firstly , when the welfare of people becomes a primacy of ruler , the people themselves gets motivated to do something back for the nation
that cares a lot about a person , this eventually lead to the development of nation by working diligently to burgeon the nation's legacy and growth.
for example , consider bhutan , bhutan is the one and only nation with no poverty and mendicants. the king himself bestows refugee or homless people with land,
and cattle. when a nation like this so concerned for you.for one hundred percent sure, the citizen will show back a great reverence for the king and nation.
this tacits the characteristic of a true ruler , despotic is not a true ruler ship. the people they themselves should show thier veneration from heart rather than from compulsion.
not only this but also free health service, and a lot more. what else can a ruler do. not only bhutan even a lot of countries have passed policies for the welfare of people and
it's evident, that those countries with such a welfare are more developed. obviously, poeple starts moving to country with such policies and eventually the gdp and economy of the nation flourshes.
in terse more the welfare concomittantly becomes a more developed country.
i conclude with the facts and evidences that great nation is not determined by the prowess of king or achievements of scientists but by the welfare of a people which eventually road towards a great nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81298701299 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66657017085 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446753246753 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.8176705109 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8125 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0625 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.97078651685 302% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 31.0 7.80617977528 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250209215055 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916289705505 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126349889822 0.0758088955206 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106996723722 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12413308561 0.0667264976115 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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