To understand the important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities
In today’s contemporary and fast paced world , each country’s major cities play a pivotal role in deciding the economic, social as well as political status of a country. The major cities reflect upon the overall development and provide a bird’s view of that country. However, the cosmopolitan cities are not alone enough to extrapolate the major characteristics of a country.
For decades, a country has been divided into two fragments. Firstly, the major cities where urbanisation and development have taken at a faster pace. Secondly, the towns and rural areas of the country which provide a closer look into a country’s cultural heritage.
Every major city of any country will always have the best amenities and facilities. For instance, consider cities such as New Delhi in India, France in Paris and Beijing in China, which provides us some insight into the culture and traditions of that countries, but does not give a holistic picture. Due to commercialisation and growing needs of each city to compete with each other in the race of being best, they are not capable of capturing the true essence of their society and the bucolic beauty of that nation. Another popular example is Paris, where people from different places of the world migrate to this place to pursue their careers and they continue their livelihood in the city of Paris. As a result, due to varied people the city would not offer the holistic view of Paris.
Therefore, to explore the cultural and traditional background of India, one must have a look at the country side which gives a clear view of Indian traditions. India, is a place where more than 70% of the people live in villages and therefore would provide a extravagant insight into the country’s culture. Moreover, the people in rural areas follow all the cultures and this cannot be found in urban areas.
Major cities will always provide information and important characteristics of a society. However, one can truly know about a country’s culture and society by studying the smaller cities and towns along with major cities for accurate knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 348.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13505747126 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87418688302 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520114942529 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0474618867 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.6875 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 5.21951772744 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229997470829 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859248546567 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937317462799 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143674145697 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119084578226 0.0667264976115 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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