To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities
In today’s contemporary and fast paced world, it is true that the major cities play a pivotal role in understanding the characteristics of the society. However, the authors claim that, to study the characteristics of a society one must only study major cities is not completely fair. Let us look further into it.
There are countries whose major population lives in the rural or smaller areas. A country like India where 70% of the people basically live in smaller towns and rural areas, only gives a partial picture of the characteristics of the society. There is a huge cultural difference in between the people in rural areas and the cities due to lack of education and exposure. For example, in many rural areas inter-caste marriages or love marriages are still prohibited or not considered as good as compared to cities where love marriages are accepted.
Secondly, one cannot get complete characteristics of a society by just studying its major cities and not exploring other parts. For example, Paris is considered as fashion capital of the world, but one cannot completely define the characterizes of the French society only based on fashion. There are other things such as Cheese, wine, etc which are also important parts of the French society but they are mostly found in the bucolic areas and not major cities.
However, most of the colleges, universities are only in the major cities and intellectual output is a major part in understanding the characteristics of the society which cannot be understood in the rural areas.
So Major cities will provide some traits about the characteristics of the society but it will give only the partial information. To fully understand the characteristics of the society both rural as well as urban areas must be considered.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 196, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...aracteristics of the society both rural as well as urban areas must be considered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 295.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07796610169 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01573009078 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484745762712 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7172576987 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.230769231 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 5.21951772744 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416595042552 0.243740707755 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142981429683 0.0831039109588 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105385331058 0.0758088955206 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241528211672 0.150359130593 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115290530819 0.0667264976115 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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