Has creating a positive image become more important than the reality behind it? In this statement, the answer is yes. Indeed, in contemporary society, with emergence of a variety of medium from television to instagram, it is undeniable that what is shown to others has become a priority. As we are living in a constant surveillance, managing a positive image has become a huge part of our lives. From a long-term point of view, however, reality behind the image matters too.
Maintaining a positive, distinctive image is not a choice, but a must to businesses. Take a smart phone industry, for example. At the earlier period, including a new function, or posing a distinctive design was considered important. However, as the technology takes steps further, it is almost impossible to differentiate one from the others with respect of its functional or aesthetical aspects. The image that the brand possesses becomes the most considered factor when choosing a mobile device. Apple’s Iphone is winning more of younger generations’ mind because young people are attracted to the idea of iphone, which is represented as ‘young, innovative, liberal’. On the other hand, Samsung’s Galaxy is suggesting more professional, technical, conservative image, which is appealing more to relatively older professionals. Like this, constructing image has become a priority among businesses, because image is what appeals to customer’s mind.
For politicians, especially presidential candidates, constructing a positive image decides whether they could be elected or not. After the invention of a television and on-line media, being politician has become all about being ‘seen as a qualified candidate’. Unlike local politics who can actually reveal themselves in their local communities, it is relatively rare thing for presidential candidates to meet electives in person and show their real selves. Instead, politicians talk to people with their images in media.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Cars have made a greater impact on society than airplanesUse specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 80
- The following was written as a part of an application for a small business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe Jazz music is extremely popular in the city of Monroe over 100 000 people attended Monroe s annual jazz festival last summer 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
... reality behind the image matters too. Maintaining a positive, distinctive im...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 302.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6059602649 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37391058914 2.79657885939 121% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629139072848 0.4932671777 128% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9303849276 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5882352941 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200403389777 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664207844478 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770768019318 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13407850878 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807943145525 0.0667264976115 121% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.38706741573 121% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.