The phrase “appealing image” can hold many meanings to an individual, it may mean having good physique, good job or a happy family. In current society, having all the above mentioned thing still can’t guarantee a individual of having a “appealing image”, as they might fall short in other areas. This idea of appealing image might is jaundiced and for people who can’t align themselves with this paradigm may also lead their social outcast.
We humans are deeply flawed even the celebrities that are deified by us are sometimes found to be involved in illicit activities. In such a society where even role models could not qualify for appealing image.This idea of appealing image remains imaginary rather than being pragmatic. Because of this idea of perfection, a common individual suffers trying to fit in to this delusional idealism
In contrast large masses despite acknowledging flaws in this idealism fell into perfectionist ideology of social media influencers. These influencers proliferates idea of having a perfect life like luxury vacation, high standards of living. Thus it can be stated that in this contemporary society having a appealing image helps in gaining a vantage position.
Some people might argue that certain certain degree of this idealism is necessary. For example there is ongoing campaign that classify obese people as beautiful, making obesity a social norm. According to a recent medical survey, obesity is one of the leading causes of death in United states of America. Therefore obesity can’t be socially acceptable as it might lead to deterioration of national health index. But because of this people having good health should not be socially outcasted because of not having a good physique.
In a nutshell, in contemporary society, people care superficial image while acknowledging the flaws in this idea of appealing image.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 298.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40268456376 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97737818655 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580536912752 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9522390509 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0771109590023 0.243740707755 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314004530819 0.0831039109588 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434283231436 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0592890843838 0.150359130593 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437996662171 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.