Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position. The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation , not competition.
Everybody has their own views and opinions on politics or be it in any area of specialization but coöperation and competition are a part of any field. They are two important qualities of a person who strives for his/her betterment especially for a person who devotes or dedicates himself to become a leader. I strongly agree that coöperation should be ingrained in them however, competition should not be completely neglected but without a doubt coöperation takes a higher place due to its pre- eminence.
To embark with , by comparing both qualities i can come to a conclusion that cooperation is a harder quality that is more difficult to inculcate or establish in the minds of the people. The most important about being cooperative is that we can build our knowledge and get to know new things because learning is a perpetual process. Why is it the harder quality to instill? It is because people always want to prove that they are superior to others and they fight over it which eventually leads to acrimony. For instance , if a leader has followers that are not willing to corporate but just compete, there's more likely a chance that they are going to separate with hostile feelings among one another.
Secondly , To handle a tortuous problem if you don't have substantial information or data to solve it, you have to be receptive and cooperative in order to gain some amount of knowledge to take the next step. Here is an example where cooperation takes over competition. Competing wont work here because there is nothing you can do hence without cooperation there is no competition. If a person lacks any of the either qualities, he is sure to face difficulties.
Thirdly , the reason why competition closely important is because it tests your abilities , lists out your weaknesses and strengths and motivates you to do better.
So when we get to know our defects and rectify them we then tend to perform better the next tune. A person grows when his abilities and actions or continuously tested and there is definitely development in his or her personal life , no question about that. For example there is a tennis player whose tennis serves are weak and has lost many matches continuously due to his weakness.By overcoming his weakness or making his weakness into strength he's definitely more likely or is certain to win his upcoming matches.
Finally , i would conclude by saying that a balance between competition and co- should be found, with an edge given to co-operation. There is no competition without co-operation so keep cooperating and competing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2162.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 433.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99307159353 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92152085238 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545034642032 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0931030166 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.111111111 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0555555556 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134084721439 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376542662926 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366740374721 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706613392453 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403767895418 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.