Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
But ... she died and was brutally killed.
The case has not yet been detected.
‘If someone has to be cursed, it must be the murderer! ’
Hejie reached into the desk and touched the notebook.
The cold coolness made his heart clear and made a certain determination.
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Between classes.
"Ajie ... Have you heard?"
Heijie's buddy, Shang Han God mysteriously leaned over: "The death of Purple Kite is not the first case!"
"What? Is there a serial killer?" Hei Jie was startled: "Did the murderer catch it?"
"It's weird ... you know, my dad is well informed. He said that the government has blocked an area where the purple kite died. It is said that several people have disappeared over there. It needs to wait for someone to deal with ... "Shang Han looked around and lowered his voice."
"Block the area? What's the use? Didn't the murderer run early?" Hejie asked inexplicably when he thought about what he had learned on the way to school in the morning.
"This ... I don't know, anyway." Shang Han scratched his head.
"That area is on the third pedestrian street. We often go to play ... remember that there is a sewer that can go through, maybe it is not blocked ... are you planning to invite me to see it together?" Hejie thought deeply. Tap the desktop with a pencil.
"What a joke? Why are we going to the murder scene, how scary!"
Shang Han made a chilling expression: "Besides ... if my father was caught, my dad would definitely kill me ... the teacher was still talking about it, it is not safe to go outside now, and we are encouraged to go home after school.
"Yeah ... who would take the initiative to run to a dangerous place?"
Heijie took his hand out of the drawer.
Although the notebook is terrible and evil, but if you don't know the name of the other party and there is no blood, the lethality is not as good as a fruit knife.
‘After all, I ’m just an ordinary person, Purple Kite, I ’m sorry ...’
In the following class, Heijie was in a trance, and was approached from school like a walking dead.
"Ajie, let's go home together."
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..... she died and was brutally killed. The case has not yet been detected. ...
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... The case has not yet been detected. ‘If someone has to be cursed, it must be...
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...e cursed, it must be the murderer! ’ Hejie reached into the desk and touched ...
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...o the desk and touched the notebook. The cold coolness made his heart clear a...
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...ar and made a certain determination. ... Between classes. &apos...
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... a certain determination. ... Between classes. 'Ajie ... H...
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...le Kite is not the first case!' 'What? Is there a serial killer?&ap...
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...pos;Did the murderer catch it?' 'Its weird ... you know, my dad is ...
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... around and lowered his voice.' 'Block the area? Whats the use? Did...
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...ice.' 'Block the area? Whats the use? Didnt the murderer run early?&...
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... 'Block the area? Whats the use? Didnt the murderer run early?' Hejie ask...
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...on the way to school in the morning. 'This ... I dont know, anyway.&apos...
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...in the morning. 'This ... I dont know, anyway.' Shang Han scratched...
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...eply. Tap the desktop with a pencil. 'What a joke? Why are we going to t...
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...o the murder scene, how scary!' Shang Han made a chilling expression: &a...
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... encouraged to go home after school. 'Yeah ... who would take the initia...
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...e to run to a dangerous place?' Heijie took his hand out of the drawer. ...
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...jie took his hand out of the drawer. Although the notebook is terrible and ev...
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...tebook is terrible and evil, but if you dont know the name of the other party and th...
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...ity is not as good as a fruit knife. ‘After all, I ’m just an ordinary person...
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...person, Purple Kite, I ’m sorry ...’ In the following class, Heijie was in a ...
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...hed from school like a walking dead. 'Ajie, lets go home together.'...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, besides, but, first, if, look, may, so, still, third, well, after all, as to, talking about, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 369.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53116531165 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.68404443914 2.79657885939 132% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628726287263 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6987117686 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5925925926 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 23.4991977007 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.03703703704 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.97078651685 422% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.039950843217 0.243740707755 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0136455996772 0.0831039109588 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258179164114 0.0758088955206 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0158541733121 0.150359130593 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323482302086 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 48.8420337079 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 12.1743820225 49% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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