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The above doctrine points loosely towards a flaw deemed responsible for bussiness loss and that too not being clearly stated.The writer tries to bring up the idea of cutting down air time for weather amd local news based on undisclosed background reasons . It would have been more pertinent to cite these before coming to drawing conclusions to the drawbacks of its implementations. It could have been anything from lack of staffing, inaccurate weather forecasting to lack of authenticity in news reports on the local domain, that might have resulted in cutting down the air time. Without knowing the reasons one cant point towards the progress of any change implemeneted in that respect.
Adding more time to national news coverage in late night news is inteslf is an unattractive move. this might have culminated to the whole idea of viewer's complaints regarding the sparsity of local news and weather forecast especially as it would be vital to report a froecast of the next day in the late night hours for early birds and can save sunbstantial resources.
This along with the cancellation of local bussiness contracts signpost a serious technical and bussiness flaw of the channel.The writer fails to augment the reasons behind the terminations as before and the reader is left to imagine any possibilites from poor bussiness strategies to underminig sunscriptions of the channel leading to bussiness loss.It would have saved some effort if at least a solid reason was made transparent to public and then possible solutions proposed. Media giants like CNN and BBC should be taken as examples in this context as many now and again disclosure of intertests highlighted keep the public trust and interest in these broadcastings streams alive.Lastly with out a sound cause , a solution of reinstating the former coverage times doesnt illuminate a smart tactic, apart from being a non-guaranteed one. A better response cpuld have been generated by conducting viewer's suveys on individual choices and preferances and then extrapolating it against the financial constrains leading to more practical and lasting solutions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, regarding, so, then, apart from, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 339.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26253687316 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96025332236 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604719764012 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.042365276 60.3974514979 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 198.222222222 118.986275619 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.6666666667 23.4991977007 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.243740707755 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0831039109588 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150359130593 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 14.1392134831 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.38706741573 118% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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