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The diagram illustrate how to produce and prepare coffee for sale in supermarkets and shops.
The whole process starts from picking the coffee beans from the fields. These coffee beans should be roasted after being dried under the sun. Then these beans are cooled very rapidly and grinded into powders by the machine.
Next, these coffee beans powders are mixed with hot water and then the mixture are stained. After a while, the mixture are going to froze . When the mixture become frozen liquid, the liquid are grind completely. After that, it can be dry in a vacuum, so the water evaporate. Finally, the liquid transfer to powders and the powders are packed into jars. Later, they can be sell in stores.
Overall, the process of producing and preparing coffee for sale are very complex, for there are lots of stages in the whole process, involving many different tools. The process start from picking the coffee beans and end at pick the coffee bean powders in to jars.
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