The diagram shows one process by which research is carried out. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown. You should write at least 150 words. IELTS Writing Task 1
The diagram shows the process which an illustration of produce research. In this report, there are several steps to follow when a researcher what to doing a research.
First of all, a sources of research ideas are came from, such as idea from previous research, idea from personal experience, or possible idea from own curiosity.
Secondly, we create a statement of research question before we design research methodology.
After research methodology is designed, the readership has been identified by a research.
In the next stage, we go with identify sources information and identify methods of obtaining it.
After that, we are collecting data before we try to analysis the data to finding what the research looking for.
The last process, we make a conclusion and do not forget to give some recommendation. In the end of the research, put some statement what the research implication. And the research is finally finished.
Sentence: The diagram shows the process which an illustration of produce research. In this report, there are several steps to follow when a researcher what to doing a research.
Suggestion: The diagram shows the process to an illustration of produce research. In this report, there are several steps to follow for a researcher what to do in a research.
Sentence: In the next stage, we go with identify sources information and identify methods of obtaining it.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to with and identify
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
Number of Paragraphs: 7 4
Read a good grammar book.
Don't put one sentence as one paragraph. better to have 4 paragraphs:
para 1: introduction
para 2: body 1
para 3: body 2
para 4: conclusion
sample:
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or
para 1: introduction
para 2: conclusion
para 3: body 1
para 4: body 2
sample:
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http://www.testbig.com/ielts-essays/graphs-below-show-types-music-album…
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 151 200
No. of Characters: 750 1500
No. of Different Words: 90 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.505 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.967 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.841 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 56 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.1 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.319 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.431 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.831 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.212 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 4