Do small children learn more quickly than adults? (RE-WRITE)
It is widely accepted that children are quicker learners than adults. However, I feel, various factors like motivation, need, interest and so on can influence it. If adults fulfill these criteria, they can also become fast learners.
Undoubtedly, children seem to learn very quickly. Childrens’ brains have a natural ability to absorb new information as part of their developmental process. However, much of their achievements are because of the social pressure. Additionally, they may be under the stress of necessity or mere interest. Schools compel them to learn many subjects, parents oblig...
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Hai Sir..... Thanks for your
Hai Sir.....
Thanks for your time...
In conclution 'if' is typed as 'it'.
Thanks for correction..
Tessy
It is widely accepted that children are quick learners than adults.
It is widely accepted that children are quicker learners than adults.
Sentence: In conclusion, adults also can prove as fast learners it they have determination, hard work and motivation.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to it and they
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