The graph and table below shows the changes in the number of overseas visitors and top 5 visitor countries to Britain I 2004 and 2005 Summarize the following information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph and table below shows the changes in the number of overseas visitors and top 5 visitor countries to Britain I 2004 and 2005.
Summarize the following information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

A glance at provided graph reveals some 5 countries which has considerable influence on Britain’s visitor quantities. Given table illustrates the alterations in the number of foreign visitors. All data is concerning 2004 and 2005.

It is apparent from the table that number of visitors fluctuated somewhere between 400 and 600 thousand visitors in 2004 until December, prior to reaching a peak point of 810 thousand people in December. Following year also faced fluctuations throughout the year varying from 350 to 700 thousand. Visitors exceeded 780 thousand in December and this trend was the highest upsurge in 2005.

Concentrating on the table, amongst Japan, China, USA, Australia and South Korea, the contribution of last one was the most significant increasing by 7% in 2005. Surprisingly, contributions of Australia and USA in visitor numbers were exactly same 2 % after 2004. In 2005, India replaced the stance of China, making up the largest upsurge which was 13%.

All in all, visitor to Britain typically swelled up to the highest point in the last months of years. Further, India’s contribution made up the highest albeit it joined to the list of countries lastly.

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A glance at provided graph reveals some 5 countries which has considerable influence on Britain’s visitor quantities.
A glance at provided graph reveals some 5 countries which have considerable influence on Britain’s visitor quantities.

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