The graph and table below shows the changes in the number of overseas visitors and top 5 visitor countries to Britain I 2004 and 2005.Summarize the following information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and table provides the differences between 2004 and 2005 the number overseas visitor's and top 5 visitor countries to Britain.

In 2004 bar graph shows that most visitors came to Britain to visit in December month, which is the highest visitor's month of the year. It is almost 800 thousand peoples and the lowest month was March almost 450 thousand travelers. In other hand, in 2005 the highest visitors; month was still December but less than last year. It was only 700 thousand peoples. The lowest visitor season was at September 300 thousand only. In case of overall year, in 2004 almost 600 thousand peoples visited in Britain monthly in average. However, in 2005 it was 100 thousand less, only 500 thousand peoples.

According to the table Japan was the highest country visited in Britain in 2004 and lowest country was South Korea. Other country were Australia, USA and China are 2nd, 3rd and 4th position respectively. In 2005 Australia became the highest visitor's country with 2% change rate and lowest country was India with 13% change rate. In term of USA this country stabilized same position but increased 2% change. In case of Japan they declined 2nd position with -3% change.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'visitors'' or 'visitor's'?
Suggestion: visitors'; visitor's
...in December month, which is the highest visitors month of the year. It is almost 800 tho...
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Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...alia became the highest visitors country with 2% change rate and lowest country w...
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Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... same position but increased 2% change. In case of Japan they declined 2nd positio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9068627451 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31303475067 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.889144296 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237919129536 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942320053973 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125513839317 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242145372613 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160996708838 0.0819641961636 196% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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