The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The given line graph illustrates information in the millions of tonnes of wheat which exported to three main cities from 1985 to 1990. The main cities’ are Australia, Canada, and European Community.
Overall, European Community seemed to, and are predicted to, be more active in export going than their other counterparts. While Canada’s export showed a gradual decrease in sale numbers during the given period, Australia also had a slight drop during five years export.
To be specific, in 1985, Canada became the highest exporter to 20 million, but it fell slightly to 16 million. However, although Canada had a slightly decrease sale in the first year, but Canada peaked at 25 million in 1988, then backed to the first level in the end period.
Approximately 15 million of wheat from Australia, made Australia was the smallest exporter in the beginning of period, and it also could not reach the expectation to improve the sale. Moreover, its decrease became the lowest from other cities which grew to 11 million.
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Not: wheat which exported to three main cities
But: wheat which are exported by three main countries
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