The graphs show number of death caused by many diseases in Someland and medical research funding each deices in 1990.
The horizontal graphs reveal that information about death in millions by six diseases and collect millions of rupees by medical researching in Someland in 1990.
It can be clearly seen that over all trend show that T.B was a dangerous disease. However,it was given less mount of money where as Aids was less dangerous but it collected highest money.In death, Tb was top of the table with highest around 1.8 millions of masses followed by Diarrhoea and Malaria with 0.5 and 0.4 millions of people respectively.Adding to it, Tropical Diseases and Aids were accounted equally at about 0.3 millions of people.
The horizontal graph depicts that in medical research funding, Aids attained 7 times more than T.B from medical research funding, about 175 millions where as 75 millions were funded equally by Leprosy and Tropical diseases. moreover, Diarroea and malaria were accounted for about 60 and 50 millions respectively.
It is, therefore, clearly that over all trend show that the figure of medical research funding did not correlate to the figure of diseases.
Sentence: It can be clearly seen that over all trend show that T.B was a dangerous disease.
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Sentence: It is, therefore, clearly that over all trend show that the figure of medical research funding did not correlate to the figure of diseases.
Description: The fragment trend show that is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace show with verb, past tense
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