Improvement in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas.
To start with, poorer nations need to increase their living standard in constantly developed world. The most important fields need to be thrived are health, education and trade. It is clear that poor countries cannot improve their different areas by themselves. Some people think that wealth nations should be shared their wealth among poorer nations, while others think that each country should take care of their people. The issue is a controversial one, but in my opinion a closer examination reveals that countries, which have good resources, have to distribute their riches among poor countries ...
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| Sun, 12/01/2013 - 07:51 | Saleh_ADNA | 81 | view |
| Tue, 05/21/2013 - 04:08 | NewUser | 80 | view |
- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, It is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views 65
- The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their chil 70
- Some people think that the sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adult.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 75
- News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would be better if more good news was reported? 60
- When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It's pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 87
I can safety come to the consequence
I can safely come to the consequence
in different aspect such as
in different aspects such as
flaws:
Need to improve the language.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 270 350
No. of Characters: 1378 1500
No. of Different Words: 145 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.054 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.104 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.458 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 109 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.305 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.688 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.34 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.506 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.064 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5