International air travel has a negative impact upon the environment and should therefore be restricted.Do you agree or disagree?

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International air travel has a negative impact upon the environment and should therefore be restricted.

Do you agree or disagree?

Majority of people nowadays love to travel by plane. Even though this could create environmental issue such as air pollution, I don't see any reasons to restrict traveling by plane.

Among different methods of transportation, people choose to travel by air due to many reasons. First of all, traveling by plane save so much time as compare to traveling by cars or by sea. For those businessman who have to travel frequently require faster mode of transportation from one place to another. Due to convenience of air travel, people have a chance to explore the world and learn the different cultures, food, etc. Furthermore, it can be seen that importing and exporting goods by using air plane helps to increase the productivity and efficiency which boost country's economy.

Despite the fact that air traveling can have an impact on quality of air, traveling by cars cause the same issue as well. Not only cars and planes can cause environment issues, using sea can cause same issues such as water pollution. If environmentalists have concern about environmental factors caused by air travel, thorough measurement has to be in placed to address the issue comparing with other modes of transportation. Though international air travel can cause this issue, it has many advantages which makes it difficult to restrict.

To summer up, it could be true that air traveling may have some environmental issue but there are many advantages of using air travels and not to restrict unless there are some concrete evident showing that this has caused such huge impact on environment.

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Sentence: Even though this could create environmental issue such as air pollution, I don't see any reasons to restrict traveling by plane.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: change issue to issues

Sentence: First of all, traveling by plane save so much time as compare to traveling by cars or by sea.
Description: The fragment plane save so is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace save with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular

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