Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say that we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Biodiversity is important to both human beings and ecological environment. While many animal species tend to die out, people have much debate on whether we should pay more attention to the survival of endangered species or the problems of ourselves. Both arguments have their reasons, and I will analyze each of them and give my opinion.
First of all, it is understandable for some people to argue that we should pay more attention to the situation of human begins. They tend to believe that extinction is a natural process that has been occurring since the existence of human being. According to ...
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