Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past
Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays due to major significant changes parents have adopted modern lifestyles. However In the past, parents would still spend quality time with their children and it helped in bonding and overall development of their child. It is agreed that adopting newer lifestyles it has enabled parents to spend less quality time with their children. This will be proven by analyzing that long work schedule and rising costs has brought major new lifestyle change among parents.
Firstly, Parents have very hectic schedule of long working hours and commute to work which has led to a major negative impact i...
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Sentence: An instance illustrating this example, Parents currently do jobs such as data processing from home through the internet which provide extra financial growth and are unable to meet the needs of their of child in terms of overall development.
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Sentence: It is my belief that that newer lifestyles has more cons than pros and it is quite logical to support this view.
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