The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts present fuel source use in units of electricity in Australia and France between 1980 and 2000. In general, it can be obviously seen that in Australia, there was no electricity unit produced by nuclear power like France had.

In Australia, the main fuel for electricity unit was coal which was used in 50 units in 1980, and 130 units in 2000. Units of electricity which were resulted by hydropower increased 16 units in 2000. However, electricity unit which was produced by natural gas and oil fell in 2000.

In France, unit of electricity which had nuclear power was added from 15 units to 126 units during two decades. Moreover, unit which used coal were stable from 1980 to 2000.

Interestingly, the usage of natural gas in France and Australia were same in 2000, 2 units in both Australia and France.

In conclusion, the pie charts show the fuel source of electricity units in Australia and France throughout two decades, from 1980 to 2000.

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